thinking about blogging, jk

thinking about blogging, jk
what should I write? lol

Friday, September 12, 2008

Unknown

I walked down a dark eerie hallway all alone
I heard a noise & wondered where it was coming from & if anyone was there
I continued down the hallway following the noise
The noise seemed to be getting louder as I ventured onward
The hallway appeared to be getting longer & longer, never ending
But I knew it had to had an ending, it was all an illusion
As the noise got louder, my heart started pounding faster
I was anxious to find out where this sound was coming from but also fearful of the unknown
I knew it was ridiculous to be acting in such a way, but I was worried
I started walking faster & finally found the room where the noise was coming from
The second I entered the room the noise stopped
I looked around & found a closed door
I wasn't sure if I should open the door, I was both scared & hesitant to find something or someone I was not suppose to
Curiosity came over me & I bravely turned the knob
Before I enter the room the door behind me slams shut
I was so startled by the loud slam that I broke the knob to the door
I enter the room scarred for my life
I look around, I am in complete darkness
The room is cluttered & has an odd smell
I see a light from the corner of the room
I try to follow the light but tripped over something
As I get up I see a shadow in front of me
I start to scream as the shadow approaches me
I realize the shadow figure is a young man
He picks me up & locks me into a dark cold room
I sat & waited for which seemed like hours but in fact were only a few minutes
I could not understand what happened & was so worried
I tried breaking the door but gave up after my numerous unsuccessful attemps
After several hours of waiting I had tired myself out from my nerves & fell asleep
I never found out what happened next because I never woke up

2 comments:

Sophia said...

Wow!! you are an omniscient writer your thoughts are deep and have a powerful meaning. you posess an originality that outshines you from the rest don't let criticism affect your writing for it is merely a device that will push you further.you are an intelligent&intellectual writer.

mike said...

Now you are strating to get freaky. That's what you need to do more of in this blog. And forget the cutsy pitures...your new photos are interesting because that captuer more of who you really are.

Keep writing and shooting