Hailey went into an online chat room to meet new people.
She knew that it was unsafe & that her parents would be very upset but she didn't care
She so desperately wanted a boyfriend & she didn't care
She knew that she was smart & that she would be careful
She would make up a name & not tell him personal information
She had it all planned out
Her name would be Leslie & she was a 18 year old girl from long beach
Who had long blonde hair down to her waist & loved long walks on the beach & watching the sunrise
So she went into a chat room for romance & there were many people in there
She was so excited but she didn't know what to say
There was a long conversation going on about love & she decided to participate
But her comments were ignored
She felt so disappointed
She left the chat room & just as she was about to turn off the computer she received a message
It was from someone that was in the chat room with her
The screen name was: This is why I'm hot
The message read:
Hey my name is Brian & I saw you in the chat room want to talk?
Hailey felt so excited
She immediately responded & said I would like very much to talk to you.
So then they talked for what felt like forever
They talked about everything & seemed to share a lot of the same interests
After several hours of talking he asked when they could meet
She was so eager to meet him
So she said how about tomorrow at Starbucks
It seemed like a great idea because Starbucks is a public place & she felt that she would have no problems
She thought that she was unlike those other people who met people they don't know at their houses or at an unsafe places
Hailey felt like everything she was doing was so different & that they made silly mistakes & that she was making intelligent decisions
But this was a big step & a very dangerous one
Hailey then ended her eight hour conversation with Brian so fulfilled & happy
Just as she was turning off the computer her brother Justin came in her room
He looked at her face & saw how happy she was
Justin was her older over protective brother
He looked over at Hailey & saw her smiling ear to ear
He asked "why are you so happy"
Hailey wasn't about to tell him the truth, she knew he would disapprove
So she lied & said that her best friend Georgina had told her a funny joke that he wouldn't understand
He brushed it off & told Hailey that he was concerned with her going online & talking to people she didn't know.
Hailey tried to act like she cared & said OK thank you I am going to bed now
She wanted him to go away so she could think about that wonderful conversation she just had with Brian
She stayed up for hours reliving the whole conversation
The next day she woke up after only a few hours of sleep
She couldn't wait to go online & see if he was on
She checked her buddy list & she got so excited when she saw that Brian was online
He instantly messaged her & her heart skipped a beat
He said: I was waiting for you to come on. I was thinking about you all night I cant wait to see you. What time can we meet? I hope to see you soon I don't want to wait too long I am quite anxious.
She could barely type back because she was so happy, she couldn't believe he felt the same for her
All she could think about was the idea of possibly having a boyfriend
It was all coming true
So she wrote back saying that she get ready now & meet him at Starbucks in 20 minutes
He responded & said great I cant wait
Hailey got dressed in her best clothes & decided not to tell anyone where she was going
As far as her parents were concerned she was still sleeping
She put pillows under her covers to form a body-like structure
She escaped out her window & went to Starbucks
As she walked in the store she saw several good looking boys
She approached all of them, none of them were Brian
After 15 minutes of waiting her heart felt like it fell into her stomach
Her brother Justin was walking in to Starbucks
She attempted to hide but it was too late
He saw her
He screamed "Hailey what are you doing here?"
Hailey replied "I lost my ring yesterday, I thought I left it here"
Justin looked at her & she knew he didn't believe her
It was the most ridiculous excuse
Then she asked him "what are you doing here?"
His response made her weak in the knees
He said "I am waiting for my friend Leslie, I was suppose to meet her here. She is my friend from Long Beach."
Hailey knew instantly that it was too ironic & that her brother was 'Brian' & that they had been talking online
She felt so sick to know that she fell in love with 'Brian' meanwhile that was her brother
She never told Justin the truth
thinking about blogging, jk
what should I write? lol
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Again, I like what you are doing with your stoires, but I would like a second draft of this that tightens it up a bit. See me about this.
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